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I don't think I could ever put into words my loneliness,
My ever growing sorrow is much to corporeal
My heart is more of a stone burdening my chest
I won't try to spell it out
Cause who would understand?
All sorrows, and pain are different,
Experienced by that one person alone.
So who am I to say mine is more painful then yours?
You won't see my tears,
You will never see my aching heart
And no one can ever understand my loneliness.
Cause really?
I will not be able to understand yours.
She spoke with such simplicity and yet her mind thought so deeply.
Take me back to when war was simple,
Sword and Bow were at the height of weapons,
When armies fought for a reason,
Not just for their government.
Take me back when Men would fight for what they believed in,
And women would stand at their side.
Tell me the tales of those brave warriors,
Who asked for nothing but your safety in return.
Just take me back to where my soul longs to be,
So that I may let me spirit be truly free...
Fresh blood runs down my arms,
The cuts are new, the knife still so sharp.
The anger in my heart gone,
The sorrow in my soul lingers still.
I can not breath
I can barely stand,
And yet here I am smiling,
Telling you all is fine
And you believe me.
Cause you can not see,
And you can not know.
I can not take solace in your light
No solace in their darkness,
I can not even find it here, in my own heart...
So I watched the Titanic today, and when my sister saw what I was watching she asked me why I was watching such a sad movie. I didn't reply. I thought about what she said, and realized that's not all the Titanic is. It's a beautiful movie about true love. About a love, a passion, a fire that awoke in the hearts of two young lovers. A fire that burned them so deeply they practically spent an entire lifetime together.  While yes, the movie is sad, Jack doesn't make it a long with many others who died. But I don't see it just for the tragedy at the end. I feel this movie brings out the true love we all wish to find and burn with at least once in our lives. I don't know, I guess I just feel when people say they don't watch the Titanic because it makes them cry, I feel...sad and confused. I don't just cry for the many fallen who die, I cry because the true love Rose and Jack shared was a burning passion I desire so deep in my soul, and I know I won't have it. Yes the movie is tragedy but it's also more then that. Its a beautiful story that awakens the passion in me that I so desire.
  • Mood: Tender


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Carly Reed
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Personal Quote:"People say 'Love is Blind' but if that's true then how are people still finding eachother even in the darkest of times?"

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MiniFearling Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the fave!
bruisedsoul1 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
yeah! I love your story! I almost wanted it to keep going but I was also happy with the ending! :D
Sunakuyagirl Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
thanx 4 da fav!!!
bruisedsoul1 Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome! :D
Sunakuyagirl Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
your icon....she is...adorable XDDDDDD
bruisedsoul1 Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer you! x3 :la:
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MiniFearling Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the fave!
bruisedsoul1 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome!! :D
MiniFearling Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks so much for the watch and all the faves! :iconsqueeeeplz:
bruisedsoul1 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome! :D I loved your story!! :glomp:
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